Hey its a decent start. Red's correct though...who is the bull? If you don't own that bull, you better get permission to use the picture, ecspecially from the photographer. That is a copyrighted picture and if Christy wanted to get nasty she could come down hard on you. Try putting pictures of you at the fair with your cattle. Purple and blue ribbons catch eyes and attract attention. Toot your own horn, good photos make people want to come see your cattle.
From personal experience, I've found people tend to not like to read a whole bunch, they'd rather look at pictures. Keep your info straight to the point and make sure its important.
Good luck! your off to a good start <party>