Good enough for the newspaper?

So I have more mishaps then one tends to admit to. For some reason I felt it necessary to post them on facebook..........then I had two people ask me to write for newspapers and another to write a book, plus a bunch of others. It's kind of sad that I can screw up enough to come up with a book. Let's see what you guys think. My apologies for the spelling, grammar errors, I typically write the stories at about midnight.  www.oregonrancher.blogspot.com

Didn't like the cussing and there was no character development. Lots of name dropping and no clear reason switching from established bloodlines to mustangs. Did you used to cut.  A chicken bill of $200 seems minimal to bring up when cutting is so expensive. It's also been a while since in generations since poco docs have been used. Distill and focus your work a little more and expand on references.

yikes, will do