the constructive criticism was to take a better picture. that way one can see if the pasterns really are forward, what his angles are, what his top line looks like, what his rump slopes like, how wide he stands behind, basically a whole host of things that are magnified in the opposite direction with a bad picture.
for me, if his top line is anything remotely like in the picture, i would fault that. he's got good hair so in a profile far away he will look nice. up close he will look like stacey keach or joe biden in a close up.